WWW: This is becomgin a very very strong project. You have explored a good range of photographers work and responded accordingly. EBI: try to develop and refine an idea before moving on to a different theme. The landscape compositions that you have developed are much stronger than the generating of landscapes using Photoshop. You should really be using your own images rather than generating them.
Feedback for groups shoot 2 and 3Some pleasing images. Shoots 2-3 really help to focus your theme. Some good composition. Critical reflections of your work help to give clarity to your ideas. To improve: check the syntax of your writing - does it make sense?
I will check my spelling and grammar mistakes in my writing. FEEDBACK FOR THE NARRATIVE PROJECT.A good start. You have selected some good contextual references and critically analysed an example of work. You have also selected other images that demonstrate your analytical understanding of the posed question (narrative). You have also conducted some competent experiments into the joiner process. You develop your ideas further to show more conisderation of how your selected artists have influenced your ideas.
My current grade is a G-14 Next I am going to record some more of my ideas towards upcoming photo shoots, displayed as a mind-map. And show how the artist have influenced me. SOME CRITICAL ANALYSIS I HAVE RECIEVEDEBI:
Your ideas for your projects have not developed, not enough evaluative writing or critical understanding of the photographers work. How can you demonstrate this? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ To improve I will show my ideas for my projects, and will show my understanding for the photographers. By doing mind maps and mood boards. Also doing updates on the photographers I am basing my work on. This week we have been learning about David Hockney. You can see the work I have been doing on him in the the projects tab and then to David Hockney. I have made a mind map on one of the pieces David Hockney has made ,Pearblossom Highway, and its features and details. I have also done a mind map of a shoot I am going to do inspired by David Hockney.
SO FAR THIS WEEK I HAVE MADE A NEW PAGE CALLED PHOTOGRAPHERS ( UNDER THE HOME TAB ) , IT HAS ALL OF THE PHOTOGRAPHERS WE HAVE COVERED SO FAR THIS YEAR. ALSO I HAVE BEEN CRITIQUED ON MY EDWARD WESTON WORK, I NEED TO EVIDENCE MY UNDERSTANDING OF EDWARD WESTON'S WORK AND ORGANIZE UPLOADING WORK
SO FAR THIS WEEK I HAVE IMPROVED MY WEBSITE BY MAKING IT MORE EASIER TO NAVIGATE WITH THE DROP DOWN MENU BUTTONS AND PUT ALL THE PHOTOS INTO THE RIGHT PLACE. AND I HAVE DONE THE PHOTO SCAVENGER HUNT FOR HOME WORK AND UPLOADED IT ONTO MY WEBSITE.
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